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The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
#show #percentage #meals #three #nutrients
the pie charts illustrate the
amount
 of three
substance
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substances
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 in our daily
meal
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meals
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 which might inappropriate for us if we consume them more than usual.
sodium
 is the first item
that
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apply
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illustrated by
chart
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the chart
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.
according to
statistics
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,statistics
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 there is 43%
sodium
 at
dinner
that
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which
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 is
maximum
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the maximum
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amount
. both
of
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apply
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breakfast
 and
snacks
 contain
a
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the
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 same percentage of
this
 nutrient
that
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which
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 is 14%. lunch consists
double
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of double
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sodium
 in comparison with
breakfast
 and
snacks
.
beside
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besides
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this
 , saturated fat forms 37% of
dinner
 and there is a constant
amount
 of it in both
snacks
 and
breakfast
that
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which
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 is 21% and 26%. the minimum
amount
 of it
is
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apply
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in the lunch
that
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which
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 is 16%. the maximum of added sugar
is
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apply
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in
snacks
 and in both
breakfast
 and lunch is approximately
a
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the
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 same
amount
that
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which
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 is 16 and 19
percent
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per cent
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.
dinner
 consists of 23 % of
this
 kind of
nutrients
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nutrient
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.
overall
 pie charts show us that the high levels of
sodium
is
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are
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 at
dinner
while
 the maximum of saturated fat and added sugar are in
dinner
 and
snacks
.
in contrast
 the minimum of
sodium
 and saturated fat and added sugar are in
breakfast
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, sodium, dinner, breakfast, snacks with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrate" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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