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Every country in the world has its road rules, but many drivers do not obey them. Why is this happening? What can be done to solve this problem?

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Most drivers do not obey the
traffic
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rules
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 and
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 has become a serious concern in every country. There are several reasons why
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 problems arise and the State should ensure by taking measures to resolve these issues. In today's busy world, time is money and everybody is in a hurry to get somewhere. In consideration of the increasing population,
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 has become a serious issue in most countries to control the movement of
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 and
people
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 disobeying the
traffic
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rules
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 by creating a nuisance to the public. The Authorities must impose hefty fines on individuals who break
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rules
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 and if they continue to do so their license must be revoked. Without serious implications of the penal code, most
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 would not abide by
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rules
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 rather than cause inconvenience. The Officials must take measures to limit the number of vehicles on the streets and ensure there is
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adequate movement of vehicles. Fines should be imposed on
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 for any violation. The roads must be widened to ensure proper movement and designated parking spaces should be allotted to the public.
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 should strictly abide by the
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rules
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 and hefty fines should be imposed for any violations. The State must ensure proper infrastructure is available to the public to avoid
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 violations.
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