Some people believe that children should do what their parents tell them to do; others think children must learn to think for themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Children

are the backbone of our country.It has been argued that some individuals feel that they should be independent

while

others believe

parents

should supervise them. In

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I will discuss both ideas and I am more in support of the latter.

To begin

,pupils sometimes need to be self-dependent,in doing so they become more confident and can carry themselves in any situation. In doing so they figure out their mistakes and change themselves to become better individuals.

For instance

,teenagers start to look for job opportunities after reaching a certain age,they fail a number of times and become upset.In the

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they try to learn from their mistakes and think for themselves which boosts their energy and confidence.

On the other hand

,

parents

think they need to look after their

children

.It is important for every parent to teach their child the difference between good and bad. As they are highly experienced and have seen the outer world they can teach their

children

good morals and values and to be disciplined.So it is vital for us to listen to our elders and work under their supervision.

For example

,it has been reported that school-aged

children

who listen to their

parents

have excellent grades and are more well-behaved because they know what is right and wrong.,

Moreover

parents

know the capability of their

children

and

hence

can guide them in the right direction.

To sum up

,

although

thinking for one's self is one way of gaining self-confidence but being under the guidance of

parents

has more advantages likeable to differentiate between good and bad and know our capabilities.