The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The maps illustrate the industrial area which is situated in the
town
of Norbiton and how it will look in future after some changes.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that a number of major modifications are going to be in the
town
of Norbiton. These include
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a playground, school, shops and other
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facilities. At present, a roundabout is situated in the middle of
this
area which is connected to the east and south
side
roads. The factories are to be placed beside the roundabout which is on the west
side
and the east
side
has some factories too. The farmland is located on the north
side
where
river
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is crossing across the farmland.
However
, the west
side
has a
town
. In future, the roundabout will be expanded and it will be connected to the north
side
, east
side
, south
side
and
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side
roads. Even the south
side
road will be connected to another roundabout which will be smaller than the previous middle one.
Playground
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, school, medical centre and three houses are
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to construct on the east
side
road in future. The
south-west
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side
will have shops beside the roundabout. There are to be planned that a big house will be built near the farmland which will be replaced on the north-east
side
. The
north-west
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side
road will have three houses which will be beside the river.
On the other hand
, the river and
town
will remain unchanged.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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