Some feel that movies and TV shows are a good way to study history despite their lack of historical accuracy at times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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by
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some
that Correct quantifier usage
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although
they have some flaws in historical preciseness, movies
and TV programmes are appropriate sources to learn history
. I mostly disagree with this
suggestion because these sources are
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while
they explain the incidents
of the
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history
. Generally, film-makers
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filmmakers
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incidents
in favour of better fiction.
Firstly
, in these videos, some affairs may be reflected without accuracy by directors. These applications often use for appealing new
viewers and keeping their attention Change preposition
to new
to
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movies
. For instance
, some groups may perform more patriotic behaviour than the real or leaders may show pure
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history
. In addition
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movies
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instead
of giving real information.
Secondly
, many substantial incidents
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movies
have been created often for commercial achievement and incidents
are based on fictions
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fiction
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the
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Thus
, their narrations and explanations have not depended on happened historical events. To illustrate that, many historical films usually avoid struggling events even though they was
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Therefore
, it leads to misleading information which is reverse
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history
and it is not useful to learn.
In conclusion, causes and examples can be multiplied with this
suggestion. Although
studying history
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due to
flaws in their explanations and lacks in their fictions
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Instead
of these streams, documentaries may be better for enthusiasts in favour of learning history
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