Some feel that movies and TV shows are a good way to study history despite their lack of historical accuracy at times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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that
although
they have some flaws in historical preciseness,
movies
and TV programmes are appropriate sources to learn
history
. I mostly disagree with
this
suggestion because these sources
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not only making failure in timing accuracy
while
they explain the
incidents
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history
. Generally,
film-makers
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may distort some truths to attract viewers
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using patriotism and nationalism and they may omit many
incidents
in favour of better fiction.
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, in these videos, some affairs may be reflected without accuracy by directors. These applications often use for appealing
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viewers and keeping their attention
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these
movies
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For instance
, some groups may perform more patriotic behaviour than the real or leaders may show
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nationalist
attitude
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which
was not happened
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in
history
.
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,
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scenes are used for attracting viewers to boast
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in some countries. In short, these
movies
may manipulate people
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watching
instead
of giving real information.
Secondly
, many substantial
incidents
have
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in these streams. Admittedly, these
movies
have been created often for commercial achievement and
incidents
are based on
fictions
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real happenings.
Thus
, their narrations and explanations have not depended on happened historical events. To illustrate that, many historical films usually avoid struggling events even though they
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significant in the historical sources, rather, they mention triumphs and conquers.
Therefore
, it leads to misleading information which is
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to
current
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of
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history
and it is not useful to learn. In conclusion, causes and examples can be multiplied with
this
suggestion.
Although
studying
history
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films and shows is easy and entertaining for people, in my opinion, it is not proper for exact learning
due to
flaws in their explanations and lacks in their
fictions
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fiction
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.
Instead
of these streams, documentaries may be better for enthusiasts in favour of learning
history
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