The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and the plans for its development.
The following map illustrates the centre of a small town called Islip and the plans for its development.
It is clear that
the major changes in the centre of a small town are the main road which will be bigger and round shape instead
of straight.
The first map shows a simple and straight main road which will be bigger and round in shape in the plans. The next change is two shops that will be reduced to one
shop in the same place and another one
will be smaller that will be called a shopping centre between the bus station which is on the left side and the car park which is on the right side. The next change is the park which is in the same place but the smaller one
. In addition
, we have two new housing, one
of them is next to the park and another one
is north of the shops. The pedestrian road is on the top of the shops and the bottom of the new housing. In the end, the place of school will be not changed.Submitted by Niyoshakhalili on
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