The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows how
instant
noodles
are manufactured. In summary, the information by sorting and reporting the main ways also
make comparisons where relevant.
In gereall
, there are eight steps Correct your spelling
general
of
manufacturing Change preposition
to
instant
noodles
. To begin
with strage
Correct your spelling
storage
strange
stage
silbs
and Correct your spelling
sibs
finally
of labelling and sealing to the cup of instant
noodles
.
Looking at the
more detail, Correct article usage
apply
the first step is
storaging
silos from flour. Correct your spelling
storage
Then
mixering
silos and water plus oil Correct your spelling
mixing
also
rolling
on the dough sheets. After that Replace the word
roll
stripping
dough and Replace the word
strip
then
discs noodles
of instant
. The block of noodles
are
cooked Change the verb form
is
on
Change preposition
in
the a
lot of oil and drying those Choose an article
the
a
noodles
. Before the
putting on Correct article usage
apply
the
some vegetables and spices which are Remove the article
apply
solty
Correct your spelling
salty
sold
solely
flaver
, Correct your spelling
flavour
putting
on cups of Wrong verb form
put
noodkes
of Correct your spelling
noodles
instant
. Final steps, ready to
labels Change preposition
apply
of
products Change preposition
apply
also
labelling and sealing outside of instant
noodles
.
After that
those Add a comma
,that
noodles
are packing
and Wrong verb form
packed
sending
Wrong verb form
sent
supermarcket
each area.Correct your spelling
supermarket
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