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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram shows how
instant
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noodles
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 are manufactured. In summary, the information by sorting and reporting the main ways
also
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 make comparisons where relevant. In
gereall
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general
, there are eight steps
of
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to
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 manufacturing
instant
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noodles
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.
To begin
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 with
strage
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storage
strange
stage
silbs
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sibs
 and
finally
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 of labelling and sealing to the cup of
instant
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noodles
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. Looking at
the
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more detail,
the first step is
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storaging
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storage
 silos from flour.
Then
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mixering
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mixing
 silos and water plus oil
also
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rolling
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roll
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 on the dough sheets. After that
stripping
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strip
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 dough and
then
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 discs
noodles
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 of
instant
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. The block of
noodles
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are
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is
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 cooked
on
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in
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the a
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the
a
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 lot of oil and drying those
noodles
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. Before
the
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apply
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putting on
the
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some vegetables and spices which are
solty
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salty
sold
solely
flaver
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flavour
,
putting
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put
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 on cups of
noodkes
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noodles
 of
instant
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. Final steps, ready
to
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apply
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labels
of
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apply
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products
also
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 labelling and sealing outside of
instant
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noodles
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. After
that
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,that
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 those
noodles
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 are
packing
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packed
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 and
sending
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sent
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supermarcket
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supermarket
 each area.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words instant, noodles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Manufacturing process
  • Noodle dough
  • Steaming
  • Cutting
  • Dough sheeting
  • Molding
  • Air-drying
  • Frying
  • Seasoning
  • Quality control
  • Packaging
  • Shelf life
  • Flavoring agents
  • Texture
  • Instant meal
  • Convenience food
  • Production line
  • Consumer
  • Ingredient mixing
  • Safety standards
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