The chart below shows what anthroplogy graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in the work after five years.
The pie chart depicts what anthropology students who graduated from one university did after they finished their undergraduate degree course. The table
illustrate
the income of the Change the verb form
illustrates
anthropologists
workers after five years of working. It is clear from the graph that the majority have a full-time job.
Change to a genitive case
anthropologist's
anthropologists'
According to
what is shown, in the pie chart, around half of the proportion do full-time work. Followed by part-time
Add an article
the part-time
a part-time
job
which Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
it
represented a small minority (15%). Correct pronoun usage
apply
Full time
and postgrad study accounted for 8% which is the same ratio Add a hyphen
Full-time
of
Change preposition
as
not
known section. The rest of the percentage flow between 5-12 per cent.
Correct article usage
the not
On the other hand
, in
the table chart, Change preposition
apply
it
explains how Correct pronoun usage
apply
they
earn after five years of work. Freelance consultants and Correct quantifier usage
much they
government
sector represented the same pattern. Both of them had 5% and 15% in 25-50 thousand and 50-75 thousand respectively. Most employers in private companies had 50-75 thousand dollars as a wage.
Correct article usage
the government
To sum up
, we could say that freelance consultants and government
sector approximately had similar behaviours.Correct article usage
the government
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