Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing to day. What are the causes of global warming and measures can goverments and individuals take to tackle the issue

An important issue faced globally in recent times is global warming. In my opinion,
this
kind of problem may happen because
carbon
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emissions from
vehicles
and illegal logging in
active
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forest,
hence
the government need several
action
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to tackle
this
issue. Some research stated that transportation has
became
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main
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source of pollution
in
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our earth. The
carbon
has
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emitted by
vehicles
contains
carbon
monoxides
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monoxide
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which
this
pollutan
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pollutant
pollution
make
green house
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greenhouse
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effects
in
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our earth,
it
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will make our temperature
rising
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globally.
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,
in
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Jakarta
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Indonesia has experienced
temperature
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a temperature
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raising since the number of active
vehicles
improve
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around
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7% each year.
Subsequently
,
this
condition has
effected
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bad weather in Jakarta which caused the number of flood occasion
has
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reported
incline
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in each area. Due
this
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condition,
government
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of Jakarta has regulated the number of active
vehicles
to reduce
the
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carbon
emission.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • greenhouse gases
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • deforestation
  • fossil fuels
  • renewable energy
  • energy efficiency
  • international cooperation
  • public awareness
  • reduce, reuse, recycle
  • sustainable practices
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