You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
Dear Sir,
I’m writing
this
letter with regards to my disappointment about the external hard disk which I Linking Words
purchaged
from your shop Correct your spelling
purchased
last
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week
on Monday.The files are not opening Use synonyms
in
the hard disk.
Change preposition
on
Last
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week
, I had the opportunity to visit your store, and I decided to buy a black projector. It was working smoothly until yesterday when I wanted to Use synonyms
double check
before attending the presentation next Add a hyphen
double-check
week
, but when I pressed the power button, it just came up with a black screen without any pictures.
Next Use synonyms
week
, I will have a presentation. It is very important to me. Because it is my final text. I spent a lot of time preparing. I need a projector to assist me in displaying some information and video Use synonyms
while
I am speaking. It Linking Words
help
my speech Change the verb form
helps
esier
for everyone to understand. Correct your spelling
easier
Furthermore
, it will help me get a high score on Linking Words
this
text
I would be grateful if you could come and check the equipment at my home, or replace it with new equipment. I look forward to hearing you soon. thank you.
Yours faithfully,Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite