In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, there are several large companies which invest a lot of money and energy
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the research of
driverless
technology. And in the future,
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transport
tools
will probably drive automatically on the road.
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, I held a relevant negative view
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change. In
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emergencies from the passengers or the breakdown of the
transport
tools
themselves will prove
this
.
Firstly
,
driverless
transport
tools
cannot tackle it well if the passengers have emergent and particular cases.
For example
,the operation system of
driverless
buses
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all set
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by a standard procedure before they begin to drive. If a person suddenly
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a serious disease or a
women
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need to give
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birth immediately, the bus cannot get the instruction
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as a human and send the passenger to a hospital.
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probably
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serious results in the end.
Therefore
,
transport
tools
cannot get rid of human drivers thoroughly.
Secondly
,
transport
tools
with no drivers may suffer system bugs during their routine operation and
this
may cause an adverse impact on the traffic.
For instance
, the more automatic a car is, the more possibilities it has system breakdown. During the morning peak, a private car
that is
driving its owner to
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suddenly cannot get started and the owner can do nothing but wait for the professionals
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to amend.
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very bad traffic and many commuters will
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for work. So,
driverless
transports
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may lead to some trouble for people. In conclusion, removing all
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human drivers and popularizing
driverless
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still have many challenges and may lead to bad impacts on people and society.
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  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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