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The line graph below shows the international student enrolment numbers at De Salle University from 1980 to 2020.

The line graph below shows the international student enrolment numbers at De Salle University from 1980 to 2020.
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gives information on transborder student enrolment numbers from the five countries at De Salle
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 from 1980 to 2020.
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 there was a dramatical increase in
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numbers
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 of
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students
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students
 who are enrolled
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 De Salle
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University
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 from 1980 to 2020
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