The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901

The given table illustrates the figure for

employees

and factories involved in silk production in two European countries, namely England and Wales from the year 1851 to the year 1901. In general,

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the

number

of  total

employees

,

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include

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male and female

worker

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workers

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of

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both England and Wales

consistenly

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consistently

fell during the period, the

number

of factories increased dramatically in

first

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ten

years

before falling

sightly

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slightly

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in the rest of

this

period. It can be easily seen that

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the figure for female

employees

was more than

male

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worker

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workers

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.  In the year 1851, the total

employees

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reached

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peak

at

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130.750 people,

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53.964 males and 76.786 females. In the following ten

years

, the

number

of total

employees

witnessed a fall of 20.000 people. Regarding the statistic

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the next 40

years

, there was a significant drop in the

number

of both male and female

employees

to 38.942 people,

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13.375 males and 25.567 females.

Moreover

, during the period, the

number

of factories witnessed a considerable rise from 272 in 1851 to 761 in 1861 before sightly falling in the next 40

years

.