The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making

sugar

from

sugar

cane.There are seven steps from compleat to

sugar

. Looking at the graph as a whole, there are seven steps in

older

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order

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to growing,harvesting,crushing,purifying

juice

,evaporator,centrifuge and

dring

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drying

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and cooling.As you can see we had a lot of time to can

sugar

. In detail,

the first step is

growing. We

havr

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have

to wait between 12 to 18 months

that

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can

sugar

canes

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cane

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,next step is that we have to

harvesting

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harvest

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by

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it by

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machine and people,after that

sugar

canes

crush

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crushed

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and they

are become

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become

have become

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juice

.In

adition

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addition

, we have to make purifying

juice

by

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with

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limestone

fiter

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filter

,

then

we have to

juice

becomes syrup by

evaporator

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an evaporator

the evaporator

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,

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apply

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after that separates

sugar

crystals from

syrup

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the syrup

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.

Finally

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,Finally

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step is that we have to dry and

cooling

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cool

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them.So we can very easily buy

sugar

from

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the supermarket

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supermarket

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however

sugar

has a lot of time to become

sugar

so we have to more thinks.