The bar graph below give information computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by the level of education for the year 2002 and 2010.
The bar charts illustrate the percentage of
computer
holders in the population from 2002 to 2010. Another bar graph shows the level of education with computers in the years 2002 and 2010.
Overall
, around 80% of people
had their own computer
in 2010. As well as
the ratio of education with digital equipment significantly increased at every level.
To begin
with, in 2002 , 58% of people
owned computers. The ratio of digital equipment ownership has been rising significantly. In 2006, computer
holders were from 62% to 65% in 2008. While
, the figures showed in 2010, the ownership of computers was the highest at 80%.
In addition
, 15% of students who had a computer
and they study for a diploma in 2002. While
this
ratio increases from 15% to 40% after eight years. Moreover
, 35% and 60% of high school children had digital equipment in 2002 and 2010 respectively. With when rising in the level of education at the same time computer
ownership increased. In last
, among people
who had postgraduate qualifications, 80% and 90% of people
owned a computer
in 2002 and 2010.Submitted by jeetkacha13 on
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