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The bar graph below give information computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by the level of education for the year 2002 and 2010.

The bar graph below give information computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by the level of education for the year 2002 and 2010.
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The bar charts illustrate the percentage of
computer
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 holders in the population from 2002 to 2010. Another bar graph shows the level of education with computers in the years 2002 and 2010.
Overall
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 , around 80% of
people
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 had their own
computer
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 in 2010.
As well as
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 the ratio of education with digital equipment significantly increased at every level.
To begin
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 with, in 2002 , 58% of
people
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 owned computers. The ratio of digital equipment ownership has been rising significantly. In 2006,
computer
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 holders were from 62% to 65% in 2008.
While
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, the figures showed in 2010, the ownership of computers was the highest at 80%.
In addition
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, 15% of students who had a
computer
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 and they study for a diploma in 2002.
While
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this
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 ratio increases from 15% to 40% after eight years.
Moreover
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, 35% and 60% of high school children had digital equipment in 2002 and 2010 respectively. With when rising in the level of education at the same time
computer
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 ownership increased. In
last
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, among
people
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 who had postgraduate qualifications, 80% and 90% of
people
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 owned a
computer
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 in 2002 and 2010.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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