The two pie charts shows the employment pattern in great Britain in 1992

The two pie charts shows the employment pattern in great Britain in 1992
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The pie charts give information about the employment pattern of both males and females in Great Britain in 1992.
This
is done in percentages.
Overall
, it is observed that managerial and professional had the highest number of employees
while
General labourers recorded the least.
To begin
, it is observed that both genders had a good number of persons in craft or similar with a figure of 27 per cent in female and 26 per cent in male respectively. The general labourers had 1% of women and 2% of men. Other manuals documented 24% of males which is 21% more than females which had 3%. In regards to the non-manual , managerial and professional listed majority of both genders, with 36 per cent in of men and 29% women. Clerical had a figure of 31% and 6%.Other non-manuals had about 9% to 6% in males and females correspondingly.
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