You are going to teach English to your friend’s child. Write a letter to your past English teacher to ask if you can borrow some books from him/her. In your letter tell your teacher about the child; say when and where you will teach the child; Explain what books you would like to borrow.

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Dear Mr Smith, I hope
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letter finds you well. I am writing to you concerning some English textbooks that I hope you can lend me. I am going to tutor English to my friend's daughter
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is in 6th grade as I am now a graduate. The student is intelligent
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, she requires some assistance in passing with good grades in the final year examination. I am planning to teach the student every weekend at her place. I still remember you had some interesting books for different grades.
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, I was wondering if you could please lend me some English books including some past papers appropriate for 6th-grade students. I am looking forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely, Will Greto
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Ensure to include the specific titles of the books you are requesting, and provide a more detailed explanation of the child's current English abilities and areas for improvement.
coherence and cohesion
The greeting and closing are polite, but consider adding a more personal touch to the greeting to show respect and appreciation for the teacher.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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