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Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.

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Some people believe that
computer
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games
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 do not have a severe impact on youngsters,
while
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 others state that
computer
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games
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 are harmful and
parents
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 should not allow kids to play them. I personally believe that video
games
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 affect
children
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 adversely and they should be limited. I feel the aforementioned way for two reasons, which I am going to explain in the following essay.
To begin
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 with,
computer
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games
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 cause one to get low grades in school. If
children
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 play
computer
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games
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, they do not realize the time and forget to do their homework, which leads to getting lower grades in their studies. My personal experience is a compelling example of
this
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. When I was a schoolgirl I used to a
computer
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game
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 which is called " Barbies". I was in a hurry to go home every day when classes finish because I was addicted to that
game
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. I hardly ate my meal and as soon as I opened my
computer
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 I started to play my favourite
game
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. I usually forget to do my homework and get lower grades. Once my
parents
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 find out that I am not doing well at school, they decided to set a password to my
computer
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,
this
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 made me very upset at first. I had no access to my favourite
game
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,
thus
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 nothing prevented me from doing my homework.
Secondly
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,
games
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 on the
computer
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 prevent
children
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 to be social with peers.
Children
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 who play
computer
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games
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 barely go out and play with
children
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,
as well as
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 help their
parents
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 with the housework.
For instance
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, my nephew was addicted to
computer
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games
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, when he was in fourth grade at school. He always used to play on the
computer
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, and he did not go outside for days, even though his friends always invited him to play. My nephew was always found accused of
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 and imitated the characters of the
game
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. He had difficulty talking with his peers when my
brother
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 took him to the guest. One day my
brother
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 told him to throw the rubbish but he forgot and played
computer
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games
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 until my
brother
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 come home. After that day her dad did not allow him to play
computer
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games
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, he started taking him to his work
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 of leaving him alone at home. If my
brother
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 did not punish my nephew he would still have difficulty talking to people and would not help with housework. In conclusion, I believe that
computer
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games
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 have a negative effect on
children
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,
thus
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parents
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 should not allow
children
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 to play them.
This
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 is because
children
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 who play
computer
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games
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 get lower scores, and they will have difficulty associating with people.

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