the pie charts below show the devices that people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in canada in two different years

The pie chart depicts compare the rate of use the electronic devices that people in the 18 to 25 age from 2009 to 2019.It is clear from the graph that the percentage of using the conventional

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dominate continuously compared to others devices over the period shown.

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the ratio of use tablets in 2009 and conventional

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in 2019 saw the lowest majority with others

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devices. In 2009 , The equivalent figure for

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ranked the highest rate

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about 34% . The second highest ratio was

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number of flat screens

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around 27% and

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mobile phones with

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26% .

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the laptop and desktop computer had the similar

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per cent

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for about 12%.

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the conventional

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represented the smallest rate in that year.