A museum near your home is looking for people to do a part time unpaid work. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary work. Explain why you want to work, describe some skills you have, and give details of your availability.

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Dear Sir or Madam,  I am writing to apply internship program
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your art gallant as a receptionist. I am
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artsy, and looking for a
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job with enjoyment.
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, I would proud to work for a company with
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museum.
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, I was mesmerized by the receptionist when I visited
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the NASA exhibition since I
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and cranny there, resulting in my unforgettable memory. I am just wondering if I could entertain
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the guests as
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part of your company. In terms of my skills, I am
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leaner
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, independent and
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.
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confidence that once I learnt the roles, I will be a reliable staff. My availability is flexible because I am working at night time, so I have no preference for
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at daytime, which is the museum business hours. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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