Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

We are living in a technological

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world where

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most of

lives

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our lives

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are dependent on smart devices

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and

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some

children

now spend a large portion scrolling on

phones

,in my opinion ,

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has a detrimental impact on their health and social lives. Social and gaming

apps

are now the main

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reasons

reason

why

children

are addicted to their

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.For starters in the past

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equipped with some basic commands like

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calling,

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and receiving

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text messages ,

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and it

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was likely

to see

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children

in those

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have interact

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with them.Smartphones nowadays, are packed with features to minimize work time and

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with

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applications .

Apps

like Facebook and TikTok.

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,use artificial intelligence to profile your favorite content to grab their attention which

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keeps

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them hooked for a long duration .

Besides

gaming

apps

,once they

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a game ,it's hard to stop because most games are design to be addictive, claiming more rewards by progression which many kids are eager to go on

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and do more harm to them . I

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believe

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most addicts would

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experience

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negative effects

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first in blue light

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from

phones

which can damage your eyes ,

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in irritation, numbness and irritation.Plus cell phone addiction can

also

affect your sleeping habits ,mood swings and feeling down every morning.

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having a lot of online friends

instead

of

realife

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real-life

friends can reduce your social skills like communication, negotiation and problem-solving skills which have less chance to learn in the real world . In

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nutshell ,social and gaming

apps

are the main issue

to

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for

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extensive use of

phones

in

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over

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a long period ,and

this

relust

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results

in various health problems and reduce

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children

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children's

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social skills.