You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter •Say what the participant liked about the hotel. •Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. • Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the future.

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Dear sir, I am writing
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letter to express my concern regarding the food served at your hotel.
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Sunday (13th of April), I organized an all-day meeting for my company called New Rise. My colleagues enjoyed their time at your hotel except for the lunch which was very disappointing. Everyone was praising the ambience and the seating arrangement that you made. Not to forget the courteous service provided by the staff.
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, the food was not up to the mark. Everything was tasteless and felt stale. The soup was so watery and the curry served in the main course had an excess amount of salt. I suggest you pay extra attention to the kitchen and provide proper training to the chefs.
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, you can make sure the items are good enough to be served to the guests before taking them out of the kitchen. I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration. Yours faithfully, Avi Mistry
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