Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
These days,
children
use Use synonyms
smartphones
constantly as their main source of entertainment. Even though Use synonyms
this
trend gives Linking Words
kids
a convenient way to engage with various types of content, it Use synonyms
also
makes them less likely to develop positive relationships with peers, so Linking Words
this
development is mostly negative.
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children
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time
on their Use synonyms
smartphones
, researchers have realized that most Use synonyms
children
do Use synonyms
this
because they do not have many other options for quick entertainment. Linking Words
For example
, some families do not go out on the weekends together often, so Linking Words
children
stay home and play games or watch movies on their Use synonyms
smartphones
to entertain themselves any Use synonyms
time
they feel bored. Use synonyms
Also
, even if their family plans some special event to do on the weekend, Linking Words
such
as a trip to the zoo or the aquarium, these places can be expensive for the whole family to visit or far from home, so these kinds of outings are a rare occurrence, which means that Linking Words
kids
will become even more dependent on their Use synonyms
smartphones
for entertainment. Use synonyms
Thus
, Linking Words
it is clear that
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family’s
lifestyle encourages young Change noun form
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children
to spend more and more Use synonyms
time
on their Use synonyms
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smartphone
.
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Although
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smartphones
can help Use synonyms
kids
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to
conveniently gain exposure to various types of music and TV shows from diverse cultures around the world, the fact that Change preposition
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children
spend a lot of Use synonyms
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on their Use synonyms
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smartphone
is very unfortunate because their obsession with digital content has made them too sensitive to social trends. Fix the agreement mistake
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For example
, before everyone had their own Linking Words
smartphone
, Use synonyms
kids
just wanted to spend quality Use synonyms
time
with each other by playing together; Use synonyms
however
, nowadays, Linking Words
kids
who watch social media influencers on their Use synonyms
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smartphone
often think that they have to buy the latest must-have items to be happy, which has made them care less about getting Fix the agreement mistake
smartphones
along with
their friends and more about showing off their trendy toys. Linking Words
This
shows how Linking Words
widespread
use of Correct article usage
the widespread
smartphones
has created a destructively materialistic culture among Use synonyms
children
.
In conclusion, modern Use synonyms
kids
use Use synonyms
smartphones
often because they can be very entertaining at any Use synonyms
time
, but dependence on Use synonyms
this
new culture of instant satisfaction has negatively affected Linking Words
kids
because they might not understand the value of real friendship if they become too obsessed with following trends.Use synonyms
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