The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied map charts demonstrate the scheme of a
museum
at two different times
such
as 1998 and 2008. Turning to the details, on the east and north-east sides of the
museum
are special and constant rooms for the exhibition of both maps.
However
, basic services like WC and shop in the south-east part were situated by permanent exhibitions in 2008,
while
the shop and the bags were located in the south-west side of the
museum
. The entrance, where you take tickets , is the same for both schemes museums in 2008 and 1998. As can be seen by the plans the garden hadn't changed location and it is still in the centre ,
although
there are fountains and a cafe nearby the garden in 2008. The unpermanent exhibition room was relocated to the east of the
museum
in 2008.
Finally
, a
museum
plan contains the restaurant on the northwest side in 2008 ,unlike the scheme that was a decade before. in conclusion, the outline of the
museum
in 2008 has significantly more facilities
in contrast
to the old plan.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words museum with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rectangular shape
  • central garden area
  • symmetrically arranged
  • expanded galleries
  • visitor flow management
  • temporary exhibition space
  • permanent gallery
  • visitor facilities
  • customer service focus
  • dedicated children's area
  • expanded restroom facilities
  • museum gardens
  • unoccupied outdoor space
  • shift towards long-term exhibits
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