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You are applying for a job and need a letter of references.

#job #references
Dear Madam Havisham, My name is Luna Lovegood and I request you write a letter of reference for
job
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. I would like to work in headquarter of UNO which is located in New York. To be accepted I should send a letter of reference until 22 March. I believe that my skills help me to make my future career. In the
future
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 I want to work as general secretary. Please, in recommendation write that I hardworking, sociable person
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, in addition,
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in addition
 I always willing to everyone in stuff. And
also
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whole
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true
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 about me as you know me
about
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for about
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 7 years. You can write
me
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to me
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 on my email which is [email protected] and I send you
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 proposal. I look forward to receiving
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 reply! Yours sincerely, Luna Lovegood
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