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Inspite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this case? wht can be done about this problem?

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last
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 decade, we have observed drastic development in the Agriculture sector to increase
production
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 of necessary
day to day
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 goods by automating machines to crop fields quickly or
spray
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 medicines to avoid any damage to farms. Still, we have
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 & critical
sitaution
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situation
situations
 when it comes to
food
 access
to
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for
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 everyone in the country. In our country, more than 50
percent
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per cent
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 of
the
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apply
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families are considered
as
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low-income
family
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families
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 and it makes them difficult to have simple
food
 as they are either expensive or sometimes not available in their areas.
Additionally
, unemployment is the other concern as
people
 can’t earn enough on daily basis to have
bare
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a bare
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 minimum healthy diet. To counter
such
 problems, Government should focus
initially
 on rural areas by creating new jobs in different sectors which will enable
people
 to become
indepdendent
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independent
 & earn money for daily living.
Moreover
,
health
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the health
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 department can educate about discounted schemes as per
family’s
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the family’s
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 income to resolve hunger & health issues. Despite having agricultural advancements,
i
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 have seen
people
 going on strikes against
export
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the export
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 policy of foods materials as
this
 is causing
increase
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an increase
the increase
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 in
vegetables
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vegetable
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 and fruits price in markets & keeping
people
 hungry.
Also
,
i
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 have experienced that
people
 tend to waste
lot
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a lot
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 of
food
 when attending marriage ceremonies, corporate parties, etc, without even thinking that
small
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a small
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 portion of wasted
food
 can feed a lot of hungry
people
.
At
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 the end, I would suggest Government authorities
to
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pay attention
on
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to
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people
's health first to avoid hunger problems rather than boosting the economy.
However
, it is everyone’s duty not to waste
lot
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 of
food
 & donate leftover
food
 to NGOs working on
this
 issue.
Along with
 that, educating nearby societies about
this
 critical problem can help to recover hunger challenges more efficiently.
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