Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.

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Hobbies
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are activities that
people
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engage in their spare
time
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to explore the interests they have in
life
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,
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art, sports and dance etc.
Hobbies
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are developed since a
peron's
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person's
childhood
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, which could even turn
as
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into
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their
career
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in adult
life
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. It is important for an
induvidual
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individual
to have a
hobby
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. Having a
hobby
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could help
an
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induvidual
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individual
in their
self growth
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and mindfulness. In an
induvidual's
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individual's
childhood
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,
hobbies
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are mainly encouraged by their parents and teachers, to help them develop
extracarricular
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extracurricular
activities.
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,
this
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could help
an
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induvidual
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individuals
in their adult
life
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to allow them to spend some
time
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with their selves. The adult
life
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of an
induvidual
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individual
can be really busy and hectic with multiple responsibilities and having a
hobby
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could allow them to get away from the stress.
Subsequently
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, developing a
hobby
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since
childhood
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could
also
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lead to an amazing
career
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.
For example
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, cricketers who started playing cricket as a
hobby
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in their
childhood
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have a big
career
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in sports and have achieved stardom as well.
On the other hand
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, the world today has become extremely busy with the development of technology and economies. As the world economies grow, the need to make more income has become an essential part of
life
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. The reason
as to
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why few
people
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devote their
time
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in
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to
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hobbies
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is because the work and personal
life
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balance has become extremely difficult with the
time
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people
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put
in
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into
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their
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career
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careers
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. Over
time
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,
an
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induvidual
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individual
become extremely consumed by their day-to-day
life
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and
career
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,
they
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and they
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forget to allow some
time
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for their selves,
such
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as involving in
hobbies
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. Having a
hobby
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is an essential part of
life
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and
this
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could be an example for
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society and mainly for the future generation to develop
such
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interests.
Furthermore
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, having a
hobby
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allows
people
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to have a healthy lifestyle as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Devote time
  • Hobbies
  • Nowadays
  • Busy
  • Fast-paced
  • Lifestyles
  • Work and career
  • Technology
  • Digital entertainment
  • Limited
  • Free time
  • Lack of motivation
  • Mental wellbeing
  • Physical wellbeing
  • Decreased
  • Social interactions
  • Creativity
  • Self-expression
  • Negative effects
  • Society
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