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The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the
number
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 of people who ride a bicycle to work in different
areas
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 of the UK between 2001 and 2011. It is obvious that the
number
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 of cycling people grew in all
the
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areas
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. There is significant growth in InnerLondon,
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Brighton and Hove. Meanwhile, even though there are a few people who lived in
Gareshead
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Gateshead
 riding to work, it saw an increase
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 from 2001 to 2011. There were 43,494 inner London residents riding to work in 2001, the
number
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 increased to 106210 in 2011, with a 144% growth. The riding
number
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 of Brighton and Hove district raised up to 6635 in 2011, which doubled the
number
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is
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in
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 2001. Among all the 12
areas
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 in the UK, 9 of them saw a growth of more than 50%. The lease is Exeter, from 2304 to 3542 with a 54% increase. Leeds,
livepool
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Liverpool
 and Outer London increase less than other
areas
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, but close to 50%
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, which is 49%,48% and 45%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Linking words: Add more linking words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, areas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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