The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table compares the
number
of people who ride a bicycle to work in different areas
of the UK between 2001 and 2011.
It is obvious that the number
of cycling people grew in all the
Correct article usage
apply
areas
. There is significant growth in InnerLondon, and
Brighton and Hove. Meanwhile, even though there are a few people who lived in Correct word choice
apply
Gareshead
riding to work, it saw an increase Correct your spelling
Gateshead
also
from 2001 to 2011.
There were 43,494 inner London residents riding to work in 2001, the number
increased to 106210 in 2011, with a 144% growth. The riding number
of Brighton and Hove district raised up to 6635 in 2011, which doubled the number
is
2001.
Among all the 12 Correct your spelling
in
areas
in the UK, 9 of them saw a growth of more than 50%. The lease is Exeter, from 2304 to 3542 with a 54% increase. Leeds, livepool
and Outer London increase less than other Correct your spelling
Liverpool
areas
, but close to 50% also
, which is 49%,48% and 45%.Submitted by aqualchu on
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