The charts below give information about attendance at entertainement venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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charts represent the number of people participating

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different events and their prices in 2009. Units are measured respectively in thousands and dollars.

Overall

, I can observe that cinemas were vastly

prefered

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compared to theme parks or sports. What

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is even more concerning is that

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data was highly correlated to the prices of the shows. Indeed, movies accounted for more than 1000 thousand entries. It was nearly three times more than theme parks and slightly less than 6 times sports games. Both of them were not even crossing the 400.000 people. Looking forward to the numbers, I acknowledge that tickets which were related to those activities had a different price range. When it comes to sports games, football was the most expensive one ranging between 71$ and 75$ for an individual ticket

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family tickets ranged between 280$ and 298$.

However

, basketball and cricket matches were far more affordable (respectively 34$ and 24$ for a single ticket).

On the other hand

, theme parks were relatively expensive compared to others. You would

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to pay 70$ to enter there.

Finally

, cinemas

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the cheapest alternative where you would have paid 15$ only for one spot (and 55$ for your family).