People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment, and not enough time on more serious duties and obligations.
Spending
time
keeping an eye on both professional and personal needs is considered a prerequisite. But in today’s time
, the inclination is more towards professional work
than giving time
to one, therefore
, I don’t agree with the statement mentioned above.
Firstly
, in today’s time
, most citizens engage in work
-life way more and it then
becomes a vital obligation. To explain, even more, studies state how most people are working more than the required time
and even after the completion of their working hours due to
the availability of internet connectivity on their smartphones and laptops. My work
life is a typical example of what is indicated here, I work
in an MNC with my working hours marked as 9 to 5 but that goes up to 8 hours of overtime every week. This
is not performed out of blissfulness but as accountability towards the company and my family. Though it is not just me every other person works in the same manner. This
is when the thought of my parents comes to my mind as they never received a call from their bosses during weekends or worked overtime during their time
. All these reasons sum up the present generation’s emphasis more on work
-life than on personal life.
Second of all, prominent leisure activities also
fall under the sphere of self-improvement. Running, for instance
, is a great way to promote one’s health. For instance
, I generally spend my free time
working out in my local gym which helps me build my stamina and keeps me fit for work
. This
helps me cooperate with my boss as well as
my children.
To conclude
, it can be stated that hardly any person focuses more on personal enjoyment. Most people are working throughout the day, and leisure activities are also
in sync with self-improvement.Submitted by susanna.alberto084 on
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