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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at the table provided reveals information about
milk
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production
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 in four countries (namely:
Netherlands
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,
Australia
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, Tanzania and
Guatemala
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) in 1990, 2000 and 2012.
Overall
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, amount of the
milk
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 produced in Tanzania and
Guatemala
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 increased between 1990 and 2010,
while
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 that in the
Netherlands
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 fluctuated and there was a decrease in
Australia
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's
milk
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production
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.
Netherlands
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 and
Australia
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 produce larger amounts of
milk
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 than the other two countries. In 1990, the
Netherlands
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 produced nearly 11.3
million
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litres
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 of
milk
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 and there was a decline of nearly 110000
litres
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 in the next decade.
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, the
production
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 soared to almost 11.5
million
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litres
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 in 2010. With regards to
Australia
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, in 1990 they produced about 11.2
million
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litres
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 and in 2000 and 2010 there were decreases of approximately 140
thousand
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 and 1.9
million
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litres
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 respectively. The
milk
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production
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 in 1990 in Tanzania was more than threefold in
Guatemala
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, being 87000
litres
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. In 2000 it rose to 142
thousand
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,
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Guatemala
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 produced mere 55
thousand
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litres
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 of
milk
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.
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, in 2010, the amount of
production
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 grew in both two countries to 155 and 84
thousand
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 respectively.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, production, netherlands, australia, guatemala, million, litres, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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