The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the table provided reveals information about
milk
production
in four countries (namely:
Netherlands
,
Australia
, Tanzania and
Guatemala
) in 1990, 2000 and 2012.
Overall
, amount of the
milk
produced in Tanzania and
Guatemala
increased between 1990 and 2010,
while
that in the
Netherlands
fluctuated and there was a decrease in
Australia
's
milk
production
.
Netherlands
and
Australia
produce larger amounts of
milk
than the other two countries. In 1990, the
Netherlands
produced nearly 11.3
million
litres
of
milk
and there was a decline of nearly 110000
litres
in the next decade.
However
, the
production
soared to almost 11.5
million
litres
in 2010. With regards to
Australia
, in 1990 they produced about 11.2
million
litres
and in 2000 and 2010 there were decreases of approximately 140
thousand
and 1.9
million
litres
respectively. The
milk
production
in 1990 in Tanzania was more than threefold in
Guatemala
, being 87000
litres
. In 2000 it rose to 142
thousand
,
while
Guatemala
produced mere 55
thousand
litres
of
milk
.
Moreover
, in 2010, the amount of
production
grew in both two countries to 155 and 84
thousand
respectively.
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