The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the table provided reveals information about
milk
production
in four countries (namely: Netherlands
, Australia
, Tanzania and Guatemala
) in 1990, 2000 and 2012.
Overall
, amount of the milk
produced in Tanzania and Guatemala
increased between 1990 and 2010, while
that in the Netherlands
fluctuated and there was a decrease in Australia
's milk
production
.
Netherlands
and Australia
produce larger amounts of milk
than the other two countries. In 1990, the Netherlands
produced nearly 11.3 million
litres
of milk
and there was a decline of nearly 110000 litres
in the next decade. However
, the production
soared to almost 11.5 million
litres
in 2010. With regards to Australia
, in 1990 they produced about 11.2 million
litres
and in 2000 and 2010 there were decreases of approximately 140 thousand
and 1.9 million
litres
respectively.
The milk
production
in 1990 in Tanzania was more than threefold in Guatemala
, being 87000 litres
. In 2000 it rose to 142 thousand
, while
Guatemala
produced mere 55 thousand
litres
of milk
. Moreover
, in 2010, the amount of production
grew in both two countries to 155 and 84 thousand
respectively.Submitted by okhaliunaa on
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