The pie charts show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in 2010
The pie chart provides the percentage of
average
expense of Add an article
the average
family
in Fix the agreement mistake
families
Japan
and malaysia
in the year 2010.
Change the capitalization
Malaysia
Overall
, transport holds the largest segment in Japan
while
the proportion of cost
of food is highest in Malaysia.Add an article
the cost
Meanwhile
Healthcare Add a comma
,Meanwhile
account
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accounts
the
lowest in both Change preposition
for the
Japan
and malaysia
.
In Change the capitalization
Malaysia
Japan
, the most expenditure is on trasnport
Correct your spelling
transport
of
29% and Health care holds the lowest Change preposition
at
segement
Correct your spelling
segment
of
6%.Food is the second largest Change preposition
at
segement
in Correct your spelling
segment
japan
of
21% andChange preposition
at
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