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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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well known
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 fact that in
modern
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 world
people
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 rather choose to
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 for themselves than to be an employee in
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the company
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. From my perspective,
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 trend become more important in view of the comprehensive development of the technology sector. Definitely, the occurrence of new ways to make living related to active
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 on social media and the range of available vacancies them. Society made a huge step
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 to be free from the strike demands of companies to staff. One of the most common ways to be self-employed nowadays is to be a “freelancer”
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work
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 on the internet on their own and
offer
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 conditions under which a person is ready to carry out
its
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their
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 task.
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, a copywriter is a quite popular position to
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 on your own in terms of spreading demand to make fascinating and literacy posts for
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, who promote their services on Instagram or Facebook.
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, the market
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 of
work
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 for
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, who are
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 in social advertising and strategies for
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people
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's attention. Most of
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 kind of
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 is carried out by
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, who in the same way evolve themselves as a service
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 the Internet that allow them to circumscribe conditions of
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 and
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 worth of their ideas respectively.
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, to be an employee in a company has its own advantages
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 with
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, who
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 by themselves. It should be noted that companies offer sustainable benefits
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 as a monthly salary, vocations, illness package and perks package that ensure
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 always be in safe
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 unpredictable circumstances of
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.
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,
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self-employed
people
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 completely depend on
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intermitten
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intermittent
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 any guarantees for their
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 in a period of crises or a competitive scope owning to their obligation to find clients on their own. In conclusion, a contemporary
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 market is full of new positions that give
people
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 a chance to be free in their
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 and to promote
own
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their own
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idea
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 as a product.
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, to be part of a big company is still considered as more safe variant concerning
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 law and guarantees by a
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 agreement.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employment
  • freelancing
  • entrepreneurship
  • autonomy
  • financial stability
  • work-life balance
  • financial insecurity
  • lack of support
  • resources
  • long working hours
  • uncertain income
  • job security
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