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Some people believe computer and mobile phone technology has changed the way we communicate positively while others feel it has had a negative impact on communication with others. discuss both views

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Technology has advanced in many ways.It has
also
 made communication easy all around the globe with the help of desktops and cell
phones
.It is argued that
this
 mode of communication has both good and bad effects on society. One of the most important advantages of using
this
 method is bridging the gap between family members.People who are residing abroad are able to talk to their loved ones through a number of modern applications like Facebook,Skype, and Facetime.
In addition
 to ,
this
 it
also
 helps young individuals in schools and colleges to present their ideas and express their views through
this
 technology with the help of projectors.
For example
,students are able to do their project assignments in a short span of time on their mobile
phones
 using various resources and
this
 not only helps them to build interest in their studies but
also
 achieve good grades.
On the other hand
,the disadvantage of using computers and mobile
phones
 is wrong information easily being spread in no time.
For instance
,the news of the famous musician being in a relationship with a teenager has been on every media and people have been circulating
this
 information to others through WhatsApp and Twitter.
In addition
 to
this
 young individuals are misusing it and
as a result
 land up in bad habits like smoking and drugs .To illustrate,it has been reported a rise in
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 number of drug addicts and smokers and the reason for
this
 is youngsters watching videos on their mobile
phones
 and trying to practice
such
 habits.
To conclude
,
although
 with the help of
cell
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,phone,
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 we are able to communicate with our family living far away we cannot forget its demerits of spreading irrelevant information.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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