A foreign visitor has only one day to spend in your country. Where should this visitor go on that day? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

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Without any ,doubt society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindset of different people.

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has become a more debatable and rising issue if the visitor has one day to spend in your country,

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where and what you should recommend to them

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Some people claim that

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their personal choice and others have views that they are guests and we should guide them.

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essay will not only shed light on both perspectives but

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my point of view will be elaborated in the conclusion. To commence with, if it comes to we should recommend them, First of all, we should keep in mind the time that they have.

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we should prescribe the

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to them.We can tell them about our historical

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,which could define the history of our country.

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way they can get knowledge regarding our ancient times.

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,Nowadays schools have different types of criteria regarding the study, which they sum the project regarding the different nations,

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students can make a project about the history of different nations, which will help to raise their marks.

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, we can advocate religious

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.we can show them our devotion towards god.How much we believe in god and that we should always help each other.

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, we can visit them in orphanages, and as a

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consequence we can ask them to contribute to helping them.

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, we should keep in mind their interest towards

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where they want to go

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their finances. How much they want to spend and we should tell them in detail about everything.

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, having said that , there is no doubt that local individuals know everything about those

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, but I believe that we should keep in mind their interests and the money they have.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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295 words

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