A foreign visitor has only one day to spend in your country. Where should this visitor go on that day? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

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Without any ,doubt society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindset of different people.

Therefore

this

has become a more debatable and rising issue if the visitor has one day to spend in your country,

then

where and what you should recommend to them

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Some people claim that

that is

their personal choice and others have views that they are guests and we should guide them.

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essay will not only shed light on both perspectives but

also

my point of view will be elaborated in the conclusion. To commence with, if it comes to we should recommend them, First of all, we should keep in mind the time that they have.

Then

we should prescribe the

places

to them.We can tell them about our historical

places

,which could define the history of our country.

This

way they can get knowledge regarding our ancient times.

For example

,Nowadays schools have different types of criteria regarding the study, which they sum the project regarding the different nations,

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students can make a project about the history of different nations, which will help to raise their marks.

Moreover

, we can advocate religious

places

.we can show them our devotion towards god.How much we believe in god and that we should always help each other.

Furthermore

, we can visit them in orphanages, and as a

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consequence we can ask them to contribute to helping them.

However

, we should keep in mind their interest towards

places

where they want to go

as well as

their finances. How much they want to spend and we should tell them in detail about everything.

To conclude

, having said that , there is no doubt that local individuals know everything about those

places

, but I believe that we should keep in mind their interests and the money they have.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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