The best way to travel is a group led by by a tour guide. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that travelling in a
group
led by an excursion agent is the best way to travel, Use synonyms
while
others oppose Linking Words
this
statement. I personally think that a band journey is not as good as a solo trek. I feel the aforementioned way for two reasons, which I will illustrate in the following essay.
First of all, why a Linking Words
group
journey is not the best is that tour Use synonyms
members
explore only the sites which are planned by a trip agent. If you want to see other places outside of the plan, the travel agent will not allow you to explore them alone. My personal experience is a compelling example of what I mean. When I was seventeen years old, I visited Uzbekistan with a Use synonyms
group
of people led by a tour guide. We explored various sites but unfortunately, I was not allowed to visit Samarkand, Use synonyms
this
was the only reason to take the Uzbekistan trip to me. Linking Words
This
made me disappointed, Linking Words
thus
I had no mood for the entire trip. If I had gone alone, I would have been to Samarkand and fulfilled my dreams.
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Last
but not least, why I am holding the opinion of a team travelling is not the best is that one is dependent on the other Linking Words
members
of the band. All people carry different traits, and others should follow them to keep the unity of the team. Use synonyms
For instance
, on the Uzbekistan travel which I mentioned above, there were some Linking Words
members
who woke up late, so we had to wait for them. Use synonyms
Besides
, some individuals were vegetarians, which is why sometimes we had to eat what they ordered. As result, I was dependent on the tour Linking Words
members
and wasted my precious time and ate meals which differs from my personal choices.
In conclusion, a Use synonyms
group
excursion led by a mentor is not the existing way to take a journey. Use synonyms
This
is because one explores only the places which were planned before, and one depends on the other team Linking Words
members
.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite