The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pictures illustrate the generation of the wave-energy machine and its location.
Overall
, as we can see, the wave generates upward and downward motion, following the airflow and there are
two
features affected by the engine's location,
costs
and the wave's size.
According to
the design, a wave-energy machine includes 4 parts, which are
two
chambers, turbines and an electricity generator. Starting at the first chamber, the water comes inside the engine
then
transforms to air and releases outside the device at another chamber.
This
process must go through the
two
turbines, generated by electricity, in order to create a level of energy. Shifting attention towards the rest image, there are
two
kinds of location options in terms of
costs
and the size of the wave.
While
the large waves create high output, resulting in more investment
due to
their high installation
costs
, the small waves produce low output and obviously bring low installation
costs
.
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