some people feel that entertainers are paid too much money do you agree or disadgree which other types of job should be highly paid
Over the recent years, a controversial debate has been going around entertainers’ remuneration. Some
individual
assume the amount of Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
money
they are getting is too much. I totally agree with this
statement and I will explain my justifications below. Also
, I believe that there exist several occupations which should be paid more than they deserve such
as teachers along with
engineers
.
To start with, it is already known that a significant proportion of people
from recreation
sector earn more abundant Correct article usage
the recreation
money
than other jobs. I do not think they ought to be allocated excessive amount
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amounts
money
as they are working for themselves not
for Add the comma(s)
,not
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
In other words
, we know that a
plenty of musicians, movie actors and sports Remove the article
apply
people
are trying to earn much
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a lot of
money
for the sake of themselves. They buy islands, luxurious cottages, cars, accessories
. I do not see here a benefit for other Correct word choice
and accessories
people
. Of course, although
some of them make donations and organize charity campaigns which worth appreciation, the vast majority of them do not do anything. If
would be nice, if big international companies and organizations help impoverished countries financially more Correct your spelling
It
instead
of giving it to some worthless “public figures”.
When it comes to jobs which should be paid more, I think educators as well as
engineers
are expected to be given more wages. It is because,
things that they are doing are benefitting the world more. Remove the comma
apply
For example
, teachers are the foundations of almost every development in life. They make people
knowledgeable, aware, and better. Even entertainers need educators. Another job is engineers
. To be more precise, in Wrong verb form
engineering
this
day and age, we highly rely on them in terms of communication, transport, food, medicine
. They are future creators. Let me cite some examples, we are running out Correct word choice
and medicine
natural
resources, the climate is changing, Change preposition
of natural
people
are struggling to grow clime-resistant crops. Who do you think can ameliorate these predicaments? Admittedly, the answer is ready, it is Correct word choice
and people
engineers
. People
can survive without blockbuster movies, hit
songs, but they cannot survive in the absence of Correct word choice
and hit
foods
.
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food
To conclude
, I deem that possibly some entertainers should be paid more, meanwhile, there are some certain jobs who are teachers and engineers
that can make differences
in our life.Fix the agreement mistake
difference
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