The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The table illustrates the
number
of Ashdown
Museum
's visitor during the period
of
before and after Change preposition
apply
refurbishment
during the year, while
the pie chart display
the satisfaction levels of guest during the two periods.
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displays
Overall
, the number
of visitors who went to Ashdown
Museum
before it was refurbished was higher than those who went after refurbishment
. In addition
, while
the number
of people
who were dissatisfied level in before the refurbishment
period
was the highest proportion, the number
of visitors who were satisfied in the period
after refurbishment
was the most.
The number
of visitors who went to Ashdown
Museum
before refurbishment
was less than those who went there the after period
, accounting for 74,000 and 92,000. Turning to visitor satisfaction, Add an article
a period
the period
people
who went to Ashdown
Museum
before refurbishment
had dissatisfied and very dissatisfied, at
Change preposition
apply
the
half, being responsible for 40 and 10 Correct article usage
apply
people
, respectively. While
the number
of people
who had very satisfied was 15, there are 30 people
who were satisfied. In the after-refurbishment
period
, the figure for people
who were very satisfied and were satisfied was over half, at 35 and 40, respectively. In addition
,the proportion of people
who had dissatisfied was 15 and the figure for people
who were very dissatisfied and no response were
equal at 5.Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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