in some culture, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough? what are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In the competitive modern world, children have to put in more endeavours to reach their goals.

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, can the

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becoming the results achieve anything

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aim to? I will discuss the benefits and drawbacks below. Parents and teachers always encourage teenagers to study harder. If adolescents work harder, they will reach astonishing outcomes that never thought of before.

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, all the Olympic athletes can stand on the stage because of continuously accumulate

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. The outstanding performance can attribute to the extraordinary resistance. When their peers were playing they gave up most leisure

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to practice.

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is the only method that can beyond the limit and surpasses others.

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. there are still some gaps that can’t compensate by hardworking. Every

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has their profession and what they are good at. If

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into unsuitable places would lead to low confidence in their persistence. To be more specific, Most

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the first place is not who is industrious in studying. There

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numerous classmates who

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studying

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the scores don’t have a direct reflection on academic performance. In

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case, didn’t mean that they are not diligent and it can be attributed to using the wrong methods or that might not be the area. Putting the same persevering endeavours in their major will be more effective. In conclusion, It is undeniable that indefatigable

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can make up for most drawbacks and achieve their targets.

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, in my opinion, recognizing individuals’ capacities and putting persistence in their profession and finding out the strategy will be a more effective clever way than just working harder.

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, it can significantly shorten the

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on useless

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