Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Hello! My name is Dana, I’m finishing the 10th grade
this
year. Next year I’m going to enter The Chinese University of
HongKong
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, which is located in Shenzhen.
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days ago I had a chance to ask some
questions
that interest me and
marketing
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coordinator answered me very clearly. I want to share with you some of my insights. First of all, you need to read all the information on the website very carefully. The information is very clear. It contains some facts about which types of scholarship the CUHK provides,
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requirements.
In addition
, you can find some photos of your future room in a dormitory and so on.
Next,
if you have some
questions
, you can send an email to CUHK. In case you have a wide range of
questions
, you can arrange a video meeting with
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coordinator through
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box, as I have done. Before the meeting, I prepared a list of
questions
that I would like to ask.
Then
I got my answers. The most essential documents related to education when \you apply for a scholarship are a transcript with grades from the 10th grade and OGE results.
Additionally
, you need to pass the international English exams. Don't apply too late! Keep up with the dates and make a plan for your admission, write down all the dates, deadlines, and the approximate time for receiving an answer. If you are under 18 at the time of admission, like me,
then
don’t worry, the university will take
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responsibility
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also
accepts minors. Thanks for watching. I hope to see
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the CUHK in Shenzhen later! Bye-bye!
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  • global communication
  • economic opportunities
  • cultural diversity
  • endangered
  • linguistic heritage
  • inclusive
  • multilingualism
  • language revitalization
  • language policy
  • language preservation
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