In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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recently, there is a trend that some
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began to investigate the history of the architecture they live in.
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about their motivations and some methods
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be useful for them to research
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, when it comes to the reasons for
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phenomenon, I surmise the building is quite unique. perhaps it has
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exotic or quaint shape which could
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the
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who live in it want to know more about its history.
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ordinary, but it is famous as a monument of someone or an event.
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, when
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attempt to explore more information about their house, searching online is the most
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approach because you may get surprised by
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historic knowledge.
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course it is uncertain that the professional will happen to reply
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your question, but no need to worry because there is another way. we can ask local residents, especially the elders for help. if they spend their whole life in the place, they are more possible to know more about those buildings. resorting to a professor is
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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