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Today’s society provides people with various ways to lose weight, such as special diets or exercise regimes. Many people believe though that poor food and today’s lifestyle should be addressed first. What is your opinion.

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The bar chart compares the GDP obtained from
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 in 5 years; 1992, 1994, 1996, 1998 and 2000. On the vertical
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 we can see the % of growth
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 on the horizontal
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 the years are displayed.
Overall
 the chart shows a huge increase in
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industry
 and a steady rise in
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industry
. Starting in 1992 the IT
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 has a percentage of 6% of the GDP. In the same
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 the
service
industry
 had the 4% of the GDP. In 1994 both industries increased, reaching respectively 8% and 6%. An insignificant decrease has hit the AI
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 dropping to less than 8%,
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 the
service
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 has slightly rose to around 7%. In 1998
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industry
 soared up to 12%
while
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 slightly increased to close to 8%.
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, in 2000, AI had
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 astonishing increase reaching 14% and
Service
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 moderately increased to 8%.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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