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The table and chart below give information on police budget

The table and chart below give information on police budget
#information #police #budget
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table and chart illustrate many data about the
police
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budget
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 in 2017 and the next year which were supplied by some sources and distributed for specific aims.
according to
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 the table, the
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budget
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 that came from the national government had a slight increase and was changed from 175.5 in 2017 to 177.8 in the next year. the other source is a local tax. The
budget
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 from it had significant grow up. from 91.2 was reached to 102.3 million dollars. the
police
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budget
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 from other sources like grants had a gentle raise ,it increased by five hundred thousand dollars.
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this
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 ,there are two charts that show how
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budget
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 was spent. In 2017 three fourth of it was spent on officers' and staff's salaries and a little less than 10 per cent was distributed to technology. in ,addition 17% of it was spent on building and transport. In 2018 the
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 for salaries decreased to 69%. In ,contrast the technology
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 was grown by approximately 6% and the building and transport
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 wasn't changed.
overall
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 the
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budget
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 had a reasonable increase, approximately 14 million dollars during one year. ,
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police
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 decided to increase the technology
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 and invested in
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 field and fell the salaries,
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 the building and transport
budget
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 remained fixed.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words police, budget with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • allocation
  • budgetary constraints
  • community policing
  • economic conditions
  • expenditures
  • funding allocation
  • governmental policies
  • operational efficiency
  • personnel costs
  • public safety
  • resource allocation
  • revenue sources
  • surveillance technology
  • trend analysis
  • fiscal responsibility
  • capital investments
  • public sector spending
  • crime rate
  • policy reform
  • infrastructure upgrades
  • staff training
  • emergency response capabilities
  • fiscal year
  • financial oversight
  • budget cuts
  • incremental increase
  • law enforcement agencies
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