The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.
The bar graph compares the
sales
of Jeans between Jack&Jones
Co
. and Mango
Co
. for the following year
in Turkey, including the pie chart
of the estimated market share at the end
of next year
.
Overall
, Jack&Jones
Co
. tends positively to sell the product more than Mango
Co
. throughout the next year
except in July and August, and its sales
will be a little drop in February. Regarding the Jack&Jones
Co
. sales
, the pie shows the result corresponding with the sales
of Mango
Co
that will be overtaken by Jack&Jones
Co
.
In the bar chart
, Jack&Jones
Co
. has the lowest percentage of selling performance in February, at around 250,000 pairs; however
, the sales
will gradually increase and peak at 900,000 pairs at the end
of the year
. While
the figure displays the percentage of Mango
Co
. sales
that will plateau from January to April, then
increase slightly until August before leveling
off, representing roughly 500,000 pairs.
Change the spelling
levelling
According to
the predicted market share chart
, Jack&Jones
Co
will beat the marketing of Mango
Co
. by approximately one-fifth of the sales
. On the contrary
, it can be seen that other companies will make up half of the whole market share which is more than both two companies in the bar chart
.Submitted by pookiekw1997 on
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