The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.

The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.
The bar graph compares the
sales
of Jeans between
Jack&Jones
Co
. and
Mango
Co
. for the following
year
in Turkey, including the pie
chart
of the estimated market share
at the end
of next
year
.
Overall
,
Jack&Jones
Co
. tends positively to sell the product more than
Mango
Co
. throughout the next
year
except in July and August, and its
sales
will be a little drop in February. Regarding the
Jack&Jones
Co
.
sales
, the pie shows the result corresponding with the
sales
of
Mango
Co
that will be overtaken by
Jack&Jones
Co
. In the bar
chart
,
Jack&Jones
Co
. has the lowest percentage of selling performance in February, at around 250,000 pairs;
however
, the
sales
will gradually increase and peak at 900,000 pairs
at the end
of the
year
.
While
the figure displays the percentage of
Mango
Co
.
sales
that will plateau from January to April,
then
increase slightly until August before
leveling
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off, representing roughly 500,000 pairs.
According to
the predicted market share
chart
,
Jack&Jones
Co
will beat the marketing of
Mango
Co
. by approximately one-fifth of the
sales
.
On the contrary
, it can be seen that other companies will make up half of the whole market share which is more than both two companies in the bar
chart
.
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  • estimated sales
  • projected market share
  • dominant player
  • competition
  • consumer choice
  • pricing strategies
  • market trends
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  • economic conditions
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