The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.

The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of Jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in Jeans at the end of next year.
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The bar graph compares the
sales
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of Jeans between
Jack&Jones
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Co
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. and
Mango
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Co
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. for the following
year
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in Turkey, including the pie
chart
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of the estimated market share
at the end
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of next
year
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.
Overall
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,
Jack&Jones
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Co
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. tends positively to sell the product more than
Mango
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Co
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. throughout the next
year
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except in July and August, and its
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will be a little drop in February. Regarding the
Jack&Jones
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Co
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.
sales
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, the pie shows the result corresponding with the
sales
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of
Mango
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Co
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that will be overtaken by
Jack&Jones
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Co
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. In the bar
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,
Jack&Jones
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Co
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. has the lowest percentage of selling performance in February, at around 250,000 pairs;
however
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, the
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will gradually increase and peak at 900,000 pairs
at the end
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of the
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.
While
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the figure displays the percentage of
Mango
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Co
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.
sales
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that will plateau from January to April,
then
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increase slightly until August before
leveling
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off, representing roughly 500,000 pairs.
According to
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the predicted market share
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,
Jack&Jones
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Co
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will beat the marketing of
Mango
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Co
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. by approximately one-fifth of the
sales
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.
On the contrary
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, it can be seen that other companies will make up half of the whole market share which is more than both two companies in the bar
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, jack&jones, co, mango, year, chart with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • estimated sales
  • projected market share
  • dominant player
  • competition
  • consumer choice
  • pricing strategies
  • market trends
  • marketing campaigns
  • economic conditions
  • fashion trends
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