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Many people nowadays believe that studying foreign languages brings us many advantages. How far you agree with this opinion?

#people #languages
In
this
 modern era, most human beings are learning overseas dialects that give more merits. I totally agree with
this
 given statement and
this
 essay shall shed light upon my perspective in the subsequent paragraphs
along with
 a reasoned conclusion. Foremost, the fundamental cause behind my agreement is that people might communicate with strangers who live on
the
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other continents and get knowledge of different cultures
as well as
 learn team spirit and improve
confidence
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 level.
For instance
, a survey conducted by Harward University revealed that in India (2016) 75% of the population has acquired
the
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other
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 of languages now they have the ability to talk to foreign commoners and
also
 have enhanced their communication level.
Besides
this
, the crowd may get occupation in
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other countries if they know about the language of their nation with the assistance of
this
 they can earn hefty amounts of money and they could not only fulfill their basic needs but
also
 secure capital for their later stage of life.
For example
, it is published an article by The Tribune newspaper showed that approximately 55% of
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humans are doing jobs out of the state because they want to earn
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massive sums of cash as they give more funds than their own region so
that is
 why they learn overseas languages and migrate to that land where they can easily pass interviews of their work.
To conclude
,
although
 non-native languages put an adverse effect on their own tradition, there are some advantages people may talk with other heritage of humans without any hesitation as they know their language and provide many job opportunities.
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