The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure center. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map demonstrates a couple of viable areas for a resort. From an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the three locations are completely different and some could be better and even more safe places for a leisure Linking Words
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Firstly
, the zone Linking Words
that is
marked with the letter A appears to be some sort of nuclear power plant with a river flowing near it. Linking Words
This
power station is understandably still utilized since fumes are smoking out of it which might be dangerous for living organisms to be around. Next up is the B section which is just a plain space with trees surrounding it, Linking Words
additionally
a road and the foundation of a waterway close to it.
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Lastly
is the C part which seems to be dissimilar to the others since it does not have a roadway nor a stream near it. Linking Words
However
, what it does contain appears to be a miniature version of a forest and a flat expanse of grasslands to the west of it.Linking Words
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