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Developing countries require international organizations’ help. Some people prefer financial aid while others think practical aid and advice are better. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some nations, which have a long way before becoming
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succesful
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successful
 countries, are in need of international support around the world.
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have
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 different needs. Some individuals would appreciate the
money
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while
 others simply would like to receive only
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useful advice
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 what they should do to improve.
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views. It is known that many people prefer financial support. It is that way because
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money
 is something we depend on. It is
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significent
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significant
 part of our lives. Getting more funds would make
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life easier, as many people would not have to worry about not having enough
money
 for making a living. There is a huge difference between
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 who is rich and who is considered to be poor. It is much easier to develop with
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financial aid. It gives
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access to many things,
such
 as
military
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weapon
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. Which gives the country more protection.
However
, practical help and
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 as much important. It pushes people to think more and work harder,
instead
 of just getting
money
. When we achieve something on our own, we are more proud and excited
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 that. It is the feeling of success, being totally independent, which drives
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humanity crazy and
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 them want to do more. For an instance showing the results of your hard work, is much more
satysfying
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satisfying
, than doing so, using the
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easiest way. Some might think that having
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infinitive access to
money
 is the best. I disagree with
this
 statement. When we meet
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 low point in our lives, it is much better to get
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advice from a stranger, than to receive
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money
. It is the knowledge of how to use it
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 and to develop well. As the feeling of growing up in
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strength
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 your own makes you look and feel powerful. Countries may prefer to receive
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financial help or
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words of advice. Both of these needs are understandable.
Nevertheless
, I believe getting
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practical support makes the process of
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 stronger and more successful in the end result.
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