The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in the other countries.
The supplied Bar chart Illustrates data about the difficulties facing people when they go to live in the other countries
A glance at the graph reveals the most challenging age in making
friends
are 18 to 34, Use synonyms
While
over 55 are lesser than that.
Looking at the information for more details in 18 to 35, learning the local language is the easiest as it shows 29%, and finding a place to live 40%, send 46% for making Linking Words
friends
.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, middle age 35 to 55 are dealing with less difficulty making Linking Words
friends
Use synonyms
to
36% And 3% plus that for finding a placeChange preposition
apply
for
, and Change preposition
apply
then
35% for Learning the local language.
For those older than 55, the most complex challenge is learning a language 54% Linking Words
then
23% for making Linking Words
friends
find 2 22% for finding a place to liveUse synonyms
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