Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession. Is this a positive or negative development?
In today's globalized, urbanized, and over-populated world, sharing
personal
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a personal
opinion
on debatable issues
are becoming more and more ordinary, especially by
popular individuals, who work in film. In my Change preposition
among
opinion
, this
is a positive development and reasons
for it Correct article usage
the reasons
articulated
in the following paragraphs.
To being with, celebrities have Add a missing verb
are articulated
a
gigantic stardom which Remove the article
apply
influence
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influences
to
a great Change preposition
apply
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
people
. Therefore
, people
try to follow their favourite ones by doing whatever they say. So that, whenever any crucial public issue
need
encouragement or need to be spread for awareness, those film stars are giving their views on that and it Change the verb form
needs
become
popular among pupil and everyone now focus on that Change the verb form
becomes
issue
. For instance
, whenever the government want to emphasize any public issue
such
as global warming, deforestation, e-waste and so on, it gave that task to celebrities for spreading awareness because citizens easily
convinced by them.
Another notable reason is, when celebrities provided their Add a missing verb
are easily
opinion
on general issues
, They also
try to be positive as much
they can because they do not want to give Correct quantifier usage
apply
negative
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the negative
a negative
aspect
of those Fix the agreement mistake
aspects
issues
as Add an article
the pupil
pupil
can blindly follow their Fix the agreement mistake
pupils
opinion
and react immediately. Due to
that, complax
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complex
issues
like religion, caste, and race could have great
impact on everybody and if they give negative views on Add an article
a great
those
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that issue
those issues
issue
, it can be converted into worst
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a worst
situation
among different Fix the agreement mistake
situations
religion
and caste Fix the agreement mistake
religions
people
. To cite an example, film stars always give positive
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a positive
view
on any stance situation of religion or caste. Fix the agreement mistake
views
This
is why they always try to be positive for spreading harmony in society.
In conclusion, Stars have gained a lot of popularity in
their throughout careers and they have a great influence on Change preposition
apply
people
. So they help with their positive view on public issues
and they also
try to make peaceful
society.Correct article usage
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite